Friday, November 10, 2017

22-Elavator Post 3

https://youtu.be/Nad6Qu7d7pE

This post I tried to focus on eye contact. My reviews from the previous pitch said that I did a good job when it came to being engaging however I looked down at my computer too much. I did not do a good job at keeping eye contact. I also paused a few times and said the word "um" a few times. This does not look good in an elevator pitch.

When I came back to do this new pitch I took all of this in to account. I read my pitch over many times and did a better job of committing it to memory. I made sure to keep eye contact with the camera. I even did a few takes to ensure that I did a good job at this. I also changed a few of my wording to make it sound more professional.

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